Writing & Yoga

Radical Revision Retreat

Manuscript Intensive in Troncones, Mexico with Mindfulness, Meditation, & Movement

December 3 - 10 2022

a dive deep into the rhythms of your own voice on the shores of the pacific

december 3-10, 2022

Join an award-winning writer and a small group of creatively invested and thoughtful writers at one of the world’s top 25 wellness centers. Not only will we focus avidly on your work-in-progress—on seeing it again, seeing it anew, seeing the outlines of its absolute most shimmering version of itself—we will also lean over the edge of doubt, where new things come from, and crack open a space for the unexpected. We will be challenged and inspired … and laugh – a lot! – while becoming vessels for creativity and breaking new ground in our work. Inquire soon, as space is limited.

Radical Revision is an intensive retreat for writers who are ready to bring their manuscript (book, chapbook, long-form essay or story, any work-in-progress) to the next level. This retreat offers thoughtfully structured, highly engaged individualized feedback workshops for every writer in attendance, as well as inspiring craft sessions and inventive generative exercises, all carefully scaffolded to bring out the best in your work-in-progress while setting you up for your best writing long after the retreat is over.

Elephant Rock writing retreats are highly unique. People tell us year after year that no matter how many writing workshops or retreats they’ve attended, Elephant Rock is different. We build creatively intense spaces that are also deeply nurturing. This helps to open and challenge every writer at every level to go further into the work, see new angles, discover sharper facets. Our intentional workshops lead you toward unfolding and connecting, discovering and uncovering. We use precise writing exercises to guide us to the page in ways we never imagined. Language comes alive again, grows more elastic and expands with possibility. And we take your work as seriously as we take our own. Many writers find this work life-changing.

This retreat is held at the gorgeous, secluded Present Moment in Ixtapa, Mexico. Present Moment, nestled right on the edge of the Pacific, is one of the world’s top 25 wellness centers. This exclusive oceanfront boutique hotel and yoga retreat is situated on a quiet, serene beach in Troncones, thirty minutes up the coast from Ixtapa, Zihuatanejo, Mexico. This center offers a breathtaking setting with wellness classes, yoga by the sea, meditation, qigong, dance classes, spa treatments, as well as local adventures such as sunset horseback riding, eco tours, waterfall hiking, kayaking, surf-yoga excursions, surf lessons, and exploring the village.

During our retreat, morning writing workshops free up your thinking about words and loosen the binds on your creative process in unexpected ways. Your inner critic will fall away as you surrender to your innate ability to imagine the unknown. Afternoon revision circles bring our attention and devotion to each other’s manuscripts, offering the opportunity for illumination and transformation.

With the ocean as our backdrop, we will make full use of our environment to infuse our writing with what can only be found where we are. Writing workshops will include innovative writing exercises that engage powerful aspects of writing craft, including the senses, imagery, dialogue, and sound, among others. Craft sessions will provide a space to talk shop and seek advice on specific projects as well as universal challenges of the writing life. Student readings will cap off this rigorous, celebratory retreat.

You will also end the week with seedlings of new work in hand as well as substantial progress toward a revision of your work in progress. You can also expect to come away with many new inroads to your creative practice as well as an array of new craft tools and insights to apply to your work after the retreat is over. Our creative work will be supported by daily yoga and meditation structured specifically to foster and support creative synergy. As you connect your body, mind, and senses through movement and stillness, you release tension and cultivate insight and balance. Ultimately, you hear your own fierce, original voice again, and find exciting new portals through which you can bring that voice to the page.

retreat instructors

Jeannine Ouellette: Writing

Jeannine is an award-winning writer whose recent memoir, The Part That Burns, was a Next Generation Indie Book Award Finalist for Women’s Literature. Her fiction, creative nonfiction, and narrative journalism has appeared widely and been supported by Millay Colony for the Arts, Brush Creek Foundation for the Arts, and Tin House. Jeannine has been writing, editing, and teaching for more than twenty years and is a writing mentor and instructor with the Catapult, the Minnesota Prison Writing Workshop and the Association of Writers & Writing Programs. She also mentors students at the University of Minnesota, where she works as a writer and editor. Jeannine earned her MFA in Fiction from Vermont College of Fine Arts, and is working on her first novel. She is the founder and artistic director of Elephant Rock.

Billie Oh: Yoga & Meditation

Billie has been practicing yoga for ten years and is a 200-hour RYT certified teacher. The heart of their teaching philosophy is to honor the body. They believe in the power of asana (shapes) to bring the mind, body, and spirit into alignment. Their teaching is rooted in functional yoga, emphasizing bodily sensation rather than aesthetic appearances. They are passionate about expanding accessibility and approachability in yoga spaces. Billie's movement and meditation practice translates on the page in fragmented and experimental literary works that explore the intersection of brain, body, and identity. Their writing has appeared in a variety of magazines and literary journals including Calyx, where their essay, “Bent: Daughterhood Recalled Through Skin and Bone,” was first-runner up for the 2019 Margarita Donnelly Prize for Prose Writing.

retreat schedule

Our retreat opens December 3 2022 (Saturday) with a causal afternoon welcome reception as participants arrive at Present Moment. Depending on your flight time, you will have some open space for settling into your rooms and exploring the grounds before our welcome circle and dinner. The daily schedule includes writing workshops, yoga, and meditation, outdoor adventures, evening fireside chats, and readings and discussions. Plus time for beach combing, conversing with other writers, and working on your manuscripts.

A detailed schedule will be presented the first evening of the retreat.

retreat fee & payment options

$3600 includes 7-nights in a double bungalow (single available for $4000), 7 gourmet breakfasts, lunches, and dinners, ground transportation to/from Ixtapa airport, daily writing workshops, daily yoga and meditation classes, evening entertainment, readings, and more.

Deposit of $1800 holds your spot; full tuition is due by October 1. Payment by check, money order, Venmo, Square, or PayPal. Please inquire for specific instructions.

apply now

Our application is simple. Just send an email with a description of your work in progress (or the project you would expect to have ready to workshop in time for this retreat). Include your questions as well, and we’ll help you determine if this retreat is right for you. Once registered, you will be provided instructions for submitting your manuscript excerpt and synopsis for workshop in advance of the retreat (estimated manuscript deadline October 1).

retreat includes

Oceanside lodging at beautiful Present Moment Retreat (7 nights)

Door-to-door ground transportation from Ixtapa airport to Present Moment Retreat Center

All meals (healthy, fresh, gourmet cuisine). Definitely included is our celebratory closing dinner on our last night—you might want to bring something “ beach fancy” to wear, whatever that means to you!

Daily workshops with specific focus on specific elements of craft, plus generative writing sessions

Daily yoga and meditation classes, plus special session for candlelight yoga and intention setting

Individualized written feedback award-winning writers, plus devoted workshop for every participant to discuss their work in progress and receive thoughtful feedback from peers

Celebratory participant readings

Evening entertainment (music, dance, etc.)

Optional group excursion (tbd on site, but could be guided hike, beachside horseback ride, snorkeling, etc.)

Optional massage and other spa services

Not Included:

Transportation to Ixtapa

Alcohol (available but not included; please only imbibe responsibly and not during scheduled programming).

Gratuities for Present Moment staff (servers, housekeeping, etc.).

Incidental fees, damages, or optional excursions or spa services.

payment plans

If you need a payment plan (e.g., four or more smaller payments over a longer time) please email or call. Alternate payment plans may be available depending upon full registration. We want you to be able to attend if possible. More questions? Please reach out!

cancellations & refunds

Elephant Rock is a small, family-run writing program and we regret that due to the fixed costs we incur when booking retreats, refunds are available only if Elephant Rock cancels the retreat—which has never happened. In cases of true hardship cancellation, we might be able to apply a portion of your tuition to a future Elephant Rock offering. We highly recommend travel insurance.

travel information

Ixtapa-Zihuatanejo International Airport (IATA: ZIH, ICAO: MMZH) is an international airport in the state of Guerrero on Mexico's Pacific Ocean coast. It receives thousands of tourists all year to visit beaches and resorts. It handles national and international air traffic for the cities of Ixtapa and Zihuatanejo. Ground transportation between the airport and Present Moment is included in your tuition. If you have travel questions, please contact elephantrockwriting@gmail.com

 

Registration is simple and easy and begins with an email to us. So if you are ready or still have a few questions, get in touch!

 

 Q & A

what if i love the idea of a writing retreat but am deathly afraid of yoga?

Don't worry. I (Jeannine) was deathly afraid of yoga when I first started practicing in public, and I sometimes still am. It's normal. But remember, yoga is not a competitive sport. It is a spiritual practice, of which the asanas (physical poses) are just one element. Yoga is therefore available to everyone, and there is no such thing as being "good" or "bad" at yoga. You don't have to be super fit or an extra twisty bobcat pretzel or have any extraordinary skills to loosen your body and mind with some gentle yoga postures with meditation and chanting. You'll be in a mixed group of all levels, you can take as many breaks as you wish, and skip as many sessions as you wish, as well. Sit in nature and watch the waves on the ocean if that's what feels right. As poet Mary Oliver would say, you only have to let the soft animal of your body love what it loves. This is your retreat. Just think of it as a chance to pamper your body, loosen your tight muscles, quiet your mind, and inspire your imagination.

what if i'm a super twisty bobcat pretzel yogi? will i be satisfied by the yoga on this retreat

Yes. You will be able to make this yoga experience entirely your own and will be invited to take poses to the maximum expression available to you. You will also have access to the yoga room throughout the retreat for your individual practice, if desired.

i've never really thought of myself as a "writer" but i'm really drawn to this retreat. will i fit in? what if I suck?

You won't suck, or you will, since in fact we all do. Isn't that the point of shitty first drafts (ala Anne Lamott?) You will fit in perfectly! The writing exercises rest on a foundation that is universal, which is our relationship to words, language, expression, the world, and ourselves. Tapping into that essence is equally challenging and inspiring for writers of all levels, we promise. We see it year after year.

i'm a serious writer trying to make my living at this arduous and competitive craft. will this retreat offer me anything in that regard?

Yes. First, the writing exercises are truly innovative and will infuse your work with a fresh and unpredictable quality that can't be quantified but can certainly be felt, immediately. These exercises are unlike your typical writing workshop. They take you through the side door of the unexpected. They occupy your rational mind in order that your subconscious can guide you back to your own wildly beating heart. They crack you up and crack you open with fits of laughter and, every year so far, bursts of tears, as well. They sometimes make the hairs on your arms stand on end. Plus, we have craft talks at meals and in the evenings, where you can bring specific questions about the more concrete aspects of writing professionally. Everyone has to pay the bills, and writing is a very fulfilling way to do that.

hmm, what about this meditation? i want to be able to meditate, i know it's valuable, but whenever i try it just feels like obsessing with my eyes closed.

So you're human, are you? Seriously, though, isn't this why they call meditation and yoga a "practice?" The wonderful thing about retreat is having the opportunity to meditate in a group--both in silent stillness and as guided by a skillful voice. I can't wait to feel what magic can happen for all of us the edge of the ocean under the equinox stars!

Check out our extensive FAQ page for more answers to your questions!